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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-02-29 08:20 AM



I Uphold The True Value Of Love

Sometimes hard to explain
The mix of emotions inside
Starts with sadness flowing
As the heart begins to slide

My mind becomes agitated
As the heart falls in the void
Both emotions stir together
My sad mixes with annoyed

In the heart and mind affairs
Taken on the emotional ride
For if my heart is floundering
Its then I can gather my pride

Strong willed comes to mind  
Given strength to rise above
Always instilled with the fact
I uphold the true value of love

HopeĀ©2004

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2004-02-29 02:25 PM


I've been there...I know this well

I love the ending verse!

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-02-29 09:39 PM



Strong willed comes to mind  
Given strength to rise above
Always instilled with the fact
I uphold the true value of love

~*~

In strength, comes knowledge.
Well done, Ma'am...

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-02-29 09:47 PM


Very nice! Grover.
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