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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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If I wrote the words you wanted to hear Would you stay? Listen to me banter On and on About the beat that constantly flows through my head Saying your name Calling your name Louder and louder I want to be the light that shines brighter than the others of your life If I wrote the words... Love, Ladycat Farewell my forever friend, may safe journeys in life always lead you home. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, lady... you wrote that want right out of my heart. *S* Excellent! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
poets seem to gain the advantage, usually |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Written well. I can relate. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ladycat -- excellent use of momentum! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
The actions of one will not always align with the wishes of another. No matter the words. Sad but true. Good capture of the heart's desire in your writing. ~K~ |
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