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Open Poetry #31

Bending Sorrow

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2004-02-29 02:17 AM

I've come to know
The trueness
Of backward smiles
And straining twinkles
In dead eyes
With no purpose
Of looking in a mirror.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-02-29 05:12 AM

that's sad

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-03-01 05:12 PM

Nice writing...James

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2004-03-01 06:18 PM

Sad sad stuff that. I hope your smiles turn around soon!!

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2004-03-01 10:49 PM

Thank you everyone. Sometimes, the sad stuff just needs somewhere to go, you know?

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2004-03-02 05:36 AM

wow, what a hopeless feeling...
Well expressed,
And yeah... sometimes the dark stuff just has to go somewhere.
And that dark stuff is my favorite... so here is a good place for it to go

Hope you're doing alright...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2004-03-02 05:51 AM

Very sad KoKo...but the words have come from within you..so for that i am glad..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2004-03-02 12:18 PM

Thank you both.

And thank you, Alyssa...I'm doing fine.

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