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Currents of a Gift
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Currents of a Gift |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Currents of a Gift My mind has shuttled back and forth The desires of a moth Seeking fires of the flame To covert them without the shame To see the bright beyond the light To fly the cradle of the night To go beyond the vertigo The mauling of the years that go It does the dance of butterflies Sings the song of lovers sighs Paints its wings with fragile hues Dipped in dawn of mornings dew It dives into the depths abyss To seek the omni of a kiss Lights a candle in a draft Mirrors it with thrift and craft Calls upon the Gods of gift To give it currents for the lift |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
''Dipped in dawn of morning dew''....i liked this line Seymour and the poem... Thanks.. goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It dives into the depths abyss To seek the omni of a kiss Lights a candle in a draft Mirrors it with thrift and craft ~*~ She smiles. So do I.   |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very uplifting write, Sy. Wonderful images. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful lyrical write this sunny morn Sy! Very much enjoyed the morning read. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It does the dance of butterflies Sings the song of lovers sighs Paints its wings with fragile hues Dipped in dawn of mornings dew Wow! This is lovely ... and with this tender impression I now leave for my Saturday tasks to be done .... Have a beautiful week-end, dear Seymour. Love, Margherita |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To see the bright beyond the light To fly the cradle of the night To go beyond the vertigo The mauling of the years that go It does the dance of butterflies Sings the song of lovers sighs Paints its wings with fragile hues Dipped in dawn of mornings dew It dives into the depths abyss To seek the omni of a kiss Lights a candle in a draft Mirrors it with thrift and craft =============================== You turn moths into Tinkerbells... never doubt you are a light in my life dear sweet Sy-guy.  and Randy is quite the pretty blue flame. *LOL*  *ww*   Through the water ... through the rain ... to the soul of everything |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Your poetry flies and sighs!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang, you're good at those last lines! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You simply catch me up in the currents of your poetic penning~ Wow ! ... the talent within you is full to over-running the banks~ I truly measure the treasure of you ... SOLID GOLD, sir~ Oh yeah ... this is beautiful~ Love you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sy, I love the way you highlighted The Moth's natural beauty. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent, as usual! Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Goldenrose Thank you sweet. Sunshine Thank you smilie. Hugs scorpio Nice comment, thank you. Nancy, Be right over for tea. Hugs Margherita You are a dear, thank you. JM So glad to see you posting answers. Once again you melted my heart. WWRS Martie In other words I'm a Sigh fly. LOL Hugs passing And you're so good at replies. Marge Now that deservies a Midnitesun, Some moths are more beautiful then butterflies. Grover Excellent, one of my favorite words. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yay, you truly are a buterfly, so fan your wings and let the light arch in the updraft and sprinkle upon all the world, yay! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, this is pure soul, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you Noah. |
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