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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-02-28 06:47 AM




the leaf beneath.......

the iced over pond

thawing s l o w l y now

catching rays
the kindly sun tosses

the leaf beneath........

to which season
is it born?

a survivor of winter?

or one in stillness
to a spring
that hasn't come?

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Goldenrose
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1 posted 2004-02-28 09:05 AM


Very nice write Ink...i always think the leaves are in ''pause''mode or suspended animation when i see them on the trees in winter....

Thank you for your words...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-02-28 02:36 PM


InkyOne~
OOOOOHhhhh !  I like this one so much~

And the title is to die for !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-28 02:48 PM


good question

I love how you see the world

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4 posted 2004-02-28 03:13 PM


A wonderful write, Mish. Open to many interpretations, worth a ponder in all seasons.  
Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-02-28 03:19 PM


Wonderful Michele...much enjoyed the read..
now off to ponder the question.
Hugs~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

bklynboy
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6 posted 2004-02-28 04:53 PM


Enjoyed!
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