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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-28 12:26 PM



If I Push Will You Pull


there have been
some reflections
in my eyes
some that were
just in passing
some that pooled me
they have all
changed me in
some way or another
I wonder if there
is true safety in eyes
or is it I cross the lines
and see the same flaws
in the ones I love
as I do myself
in chasing them
as I chase off myself


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-28 04:54 AM


I like this write very much... it leaves me much to ponder... and wishing I could actually look in those eyes for answers. *S*
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-02-28 05:21 AM


precious
C?
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3 posted 2004-02-28 05:25 AM


nicely done,
I liked the flow of this one,
C?

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-02-28 06:52 AM


Very good writing here..i like the questions you ask yourself..life is a series of questions...

Thank you for your words....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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