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Fitting Epitaph
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Fitting Epitaph Tacky wooden sign on a fleamarket stall: "You break it You buy it" That's fitting. You smashed my second-hand dreams, when will you settle up? Why do I ask? You walk away from me like you've walked away from every promise you ever swore, every debt you ever made. Oh, right. I forgot. The world owed you. Well, I didn't. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
wow, wow, hey, wow! i scream that in my head all the time!! you know this is soooo easy to relate to...very strong...thank you for saying outloud what ive been wanting to!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Well maybe you should warn him that just like a heart, it has a tag you cannot tear off like one on a mattress, and it is truly like a criminal offense! (sad sigh) I hope you feel better soon, I send healing angel hugs to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
the pen IS mightier than the sword! this one cuts, lady. well done. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Zowie! You tell him, girl!  Cleverly written! ~ with lots of power! You are woman and you roar! Love & Light, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I understand this one all too well! *S* But what strength and sense of self the ending shows... bravo! *S* |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Straight to the point here...your words were honest and good... Thank you. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Like it ... LIKE IT ... LIKE IT ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
muted, struck a spark, eh? I've read your stuff, girl. It's all great. But I could tell you'd know about this feeling. Noah, thanks but this was all a long time ago. He never learned and it's too late now. Edder, what a compliment! Thank you. EA, thanks, girl. suthern, I knew you'd relate to this one. I'm pleased you like the ending-I admire the way you write. Goldenrose, thank you so much for reading and replying-I appreciate it more than you can know. Marge- Thanks, lady! You're a pet.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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