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A Final Word
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A Final Word |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Goodbye is such a final word held together with my tears Saying it out loud will cause such pain for many years It must be, it’s time you see for me to leave this place So show me your goodbye smile show me your goodbye face While here, I hope that I have touched a life or two Your words touched me I know That’s why this is hard to do Is goodbye a soft handshake? A hug with tender sighs? We’ll know soon enough my friend When I have to say my goodbyes |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
The final word, I hear you... very nice write! Grover. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I find it hard to embrace goodbye...and I always want to tell those I care about the truth of their impact... Time is endless...All prayers. TD |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sharon..I truly hope that this is just a post and not a real goodbye. Your spirit and energy helps make these blue pages thrive and it would be a huge loss to us to lose you. I do truly hope this is not "Goodbye". believe in what your heart feels... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Goodbyes are so hard. I know! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I never want to leave anyone behind... so I say "later..." in other countries, they believe this is much better than goodbye. Which means forever. Very nice, Devine One... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's a word that's trembling on my tongue these days... I'm just afraid I'd end my world by speaking it. Excellent write, dear lady... as always. If this is more than a poem, know you'll be missed so much... never doubt you have touched. May your path be kind... and bring you back this way again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, you can't leave...that's that! just cuz I said so. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very gentle poerty...goodbye should not be said....till wee meet agin soon...is better.. Thank you for your words... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
No Sharon.... tell us its just a poem, please. And hurry, I don't want to worry. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just when I got accustomed to you posting strictly imaginative poems, you post this. I've spent the past day saying to myself that it's another devine poem, Karen. But I guess I know better. I'm one of the lucky ones too, I don't have to say goodbye. (Lucky or stubborn? because I just refuse to say goodbye.) So let's just NOT say goodbye. I like to think that you will pop in from time to time, and regale us with tales of your adventures. I'm sad for us, but excited for you. You are a wonderful, caring, sensitive person and I consider myself one of the luckiest people alive to have met you. The gifts you've given me are priceless, and I have tangible gifts to touch and remind me of your kindness and generosity too. (Our ornament hangs from my desk lamp, and my mouse loves her new pad...a cranberry oriental rug! As always, you do know me...) Thank you Sharon. The forum will miss your humor and thoughtfulness. (I understand that on your way "there" you have to pass through "here". Consider that a date.) Love you much devine poet. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ditto my soul sister up there above me - but I am SO excited for your new beginnings, and even your cat gets to play "Thelma"  Heck you know I don't do goodbyes, and sure can't do them right now, so later PoetrydeVinegator, at least in the halls of Passions anyway. Seems to me that in the hallways out of here, I can't get rid of you not matter how hard I try, LOL. You know I am kidding oh poetry partner of crime that you are and you are truly a blessing in my life.The months will fly by fast, and the beauty is - you will be full of poetic passion when you do return. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"You say good-bye... and I'll say hello.. hello, hello??" This is a great poem - BUT - Not to worry, PdV.. We're saving your place for ya - Those deVine shoes would be far to difficult to fill by anyone else anyway. Have a wonderful trip and get back ASAP, All righty??... |
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