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Open Poetry #31

Was It A Dream?

David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2004-02-27 12:16 PM

Was It A Dream?

I dreamt the fondest dream the other night,
A dream I doubt could ever be surpassed.
And suffering delusions of delight,
I languished in the spell the dream had cast.
It must have been a magical charade,
For you and I were there in paradise.
Unhampered by demands so often made,
And free from foolish fears and sad advice.
We ate and talked and laughed and loved and cried,
We smiled and joked at feeling so relieved,
And while we could we savored love denied,
Abiding in a world our hearts conceived.

If only life could replicate these themes,
I wouldn’t have to love you in my dreams

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-02-27 12:49 PM

Oh this is wonderful!
And a dream like this each night would be heaven indeed.
Hugs~

~ Can I keep you? ~
-Casper

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

2 posted 2004-02-27 03:21 PM

This IS quite nice! THANKS

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-02-28 08:52 PM

David...
So enjoyed the lightness and wonder woven in this piece.
TD

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-02-28 08:55 PM

Nice dreams to have in a nice moment.

Enjoyed it

Dave

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