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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-02-27 07:37 AM


Time unfurls its wings in assembling prose
Swelling the house, seeming to me, by example
Soar of this place, comprehending impression
Urging us, to a…what was and will be passage
Standing in the heart of endless endowments
Like wandering scholars feeding on nature’s palace

Giant seas of nomadic forces restart a novel employ
Like gazing at far away ships at sea, seeming as floating toys
Yet unmistakably there…..
What light influences all things between this world and the next?
Does that verse of science, analyze such things intricate

All is sufficient, realizing nature’s persistence
Skipping down this hall of indicative children
Doing nothing, would implement more negative
Then yielding an embrace, breeding lucrative feelings

I see great smiling faces of colorful endless oceans
Father of impressionism, paints this endless phenomenon
Crossroads of some central plateau, containing the doves
Casting their baptisms, open for witness, on rocks

My first thoughts are rendered back, flashing across the mind
Noticing the power and speed of philosophical light
Angels walk by smiling a vocal wave
Expressing their purpose for such an external parade

Use of great men reading the mystics
Their essays conveying lectures of skeptics
Wondering if life’s words spin circles transcending
Defying all knowledge, rhyme or reason
Bringing together some great metaphysical writings

Regardless of weakened conditions I will continue to write
And perhaps
Die a few times, from those sweet friends who cling to harsh climates
Collectors will continue to remove relics from my flesh
But the insistence of the Old Man isn’t done with me yet

Clarity has or will never find me, it’s got its own views
I’ll try and consider every mistake, as mere human
How awesome it is to feel unbiased like an artist
To lean that canvas north hopefully towards change
To look up, and around with the intense face of fate
To try and be as one would hope to envision
The human race


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
1 posted 2004-02-27 07:41 AM


Your writing is intense and creative.
Very impressive.

Deb

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

2 posted 2004-02-27 07:47 AM


Your work has such depth...the words are not simply chosen but selected....thought has gone into your words..

Thank you for them...


Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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