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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-02-27 04:45 AM


Where did you rest, during the cold snowy night?


Fitfully you slept, awaiting the dawn. Winter cold weather and predators are your enemy.


Precariuosly your life hangs in the balence.
Your delicate beauty moves me, your spirit, your life is everything to me.


As i and others rush past, you dart and run past feet and watch. A reversal of life, birds watching humans.


Others do not see or heed you, i know you intimately, your soul is my soul, your heart is mine, for you are the essence of life.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-27 06:29 AM



So you see the little ones too,
during the course of scurry and hurry.
They do have a way
of looking through you...as if
they know it's only about
survival.

Well done, Sir.

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-02-27 06:41 AM


Thank you Sunshine for your reply..i saw the Pied Wagtail this very morning.... and  wrote  the poem down as soon as i had got home..we had snow last night....and when you see their delicate bodies and tiny legs and feet..you wonder how they ever see the winter through..they move into the towns for extra warmth...that is why we see their unique lives played out for us as we go to the stores....

Again thank you..i just wanted to share this with everyone....

Golderose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-02-27 08:00 AM


"for you are the essence of life"

I've oft wondered why, so many do not stop and take a long deep breath, inhauling natures sensuous lore over us...feeding us constantly, showing us the great path of voice, example and truths...there are among us...whisperings which glow in the dark...sheding their humbleness in the midst of open range, clarifing fear is our own misgiving to blame...oh how great life is...oh the wonder of that priviledge?  

And thats what your words invoked this morning...thank you for the blessings you've triggered among all who read.  Lovely!!!!


Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-02-27 08:06 AM


LeeJ Your kind words are exactly the reason for me to continue and to love what i do ....write poetry...the wonders of nature show us examples everyday...of the things that realy matter..

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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