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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
distance runs further, deeper'n my reach trees bend alone together puddles form quietly worms miss nothing sky blue foams birds dance leaves fly sobs wrack moss plays nicely distance looms closer, deeper'n my reach smiles swerve misty green hues lizards skate ice forms minds hate asking sweats all the fear out my heart pain tingles births happen love saves. machiner |
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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
This may not make too much sense to anybody. It's part of my spiritual journey. So far I can only see... machiner |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like the picture of smiles swerving.... This is one to make you think, and great imagery. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Machiner -- superb! I really, really liked this -- the idea, as well as the flow and rhythm of it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice format I can understand |
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