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Bedtime Story |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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a humble hillside hobbit man always adventures yet sticks to his plan retires to a little house underground scrumpious smells of cooking float all around fresh breads and cookies , some ale or some tea ? butter scones and smoke rings , crackers with bree old tatered scrolls, and inkpens scattered a mess though the sign of a genius is well cluttered desk Beside the warm stones of the fireplace warm wiffs of a kettle steaming with grace a story surely brewing in the cool air tonight a tale of a dragons treasure, a princess and a knight The history goes deep and maybe deeper it goes between the lines of the ages to the invisable flows the universe and solar system our orbit is a gift for whatever reasons the planets did shift tilted to perfection the sun and the moon reminders to us whats to come soon a dawn and a dusk were anew everyday soon the springtime shall thaw the ice of today JWIII 2/26/2004 |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a dawn and a dusk were anew everyday soon the springtime shall thaw the ice of today'' ~~ refreshing and uplifting, as spring is right around the corner...well done!! ~~**~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
aujussy wolf -- this was wonderful to read. Wonderful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I had to giggle at the first image I got in my head when I started reading....I hope that doesn't offend you couldn't help but to think of the hobbit...sort of whimiscal delightful ending to this...well done! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"soon the springtime shall thaw the ice of today" ...and hope springs eternal...good write with a very nice ending. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I loved this! A touch of magic and whimsy! Very much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!A vision of fantasy that is a pure treasure....I LOVE IT!!!! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Thank you alll soooo much for the sweet replys , it was a fun one to write ..for sure a middle earth warm shire feeling , was in my heart that day ... thanks again  jwolf |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice little story...James |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed this very much. Uplifting and magical. believe in what your heart feels... |
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