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Will it Hit Tonight
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Will it Hit Tonight |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
More than a hundred feet long to start enough to make the dinosaurs depart, wasn't there to see the final impact but am here to see what's left intact.. We'd talk about spoils of the fruit we pick parley about vocations we'd find that stick; unwanted jobs that haunt us from one day to next prevent us from our search for a treasured quest... search for benign bodies that fly the skies rocky chunks from an asteroid belt up on high eventually to take the breath of existence away an astronomer will want to call shots that day... that it takes one more than a hundred feet long that would resonate as the last emperor's gong... throughout world countries far and wide the smallest beast hasn't a chance to hide... except, they say, for the rat in the sewer who'd mutate best as earth's spit would skewer, the flesh of our existence to a recorded past that two legged creature came and went so fast.. © Copyright 2004 ecrivan |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
eventually to take the breath of existence away an astronomer will want to call shots that day... You're getting close! Not sure I understand the meaning to this, but I did enjoy the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Martin! Much enjoyed the read..leaving a lot for the reader to ponder. Well done. Hugs~
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Hi Nancy, Blues Seranade just based on a story about an astronomer who wanted his siting announced there was a one in four chanbes we could have been hit! |
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