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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-02-26 04:56 PM

dishes caked
with last nights sauce

day old eggs run down
novembers pie

meals stack high

syrup thick
with yesterday's rhyme

leftovers add to
this burdenedsome tie

swept off in sonnets

wanting to hide

if i leave them my shadow
can i grow wings and fly?

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-26-2004 10:04 PM).]

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-26 05:00 PM

Some pretty cool images here! Grover.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-02-26 05:07 PM

Sure you can, you can do just about
anything....This poem made me a tad bit
hungry....

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-02-26 05:11 PM

I like this, Michelle. Very much!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-02-26 06:00 PM

Well done Michele...love your style.
Hugs~

~ Can I keep you? ~
-Casper

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2004-02-26 10:00 PM

if i leave them my shadow
can i grow wings and fly?

Sure why not. Interesting piece

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2004-02-27 12:16 PM

meals stack high

syrup thick
with yesterday's rhyme

leftovers add to
this burdenedsome tie

Half baked, is what it is....
You're so cute, girlie girl!

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

7 posted 2004-02-27 12:22 PM

fly on , great poem
JW

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-02-27 04:11 AM

"right on sister!"

you can fly, i know you can

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2004-02-27 04:21 AM

How come my dishes never look that
interesting?
This was great

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-02-27 03:37 PM

thanks for stopping in

glad to have company

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2004-02-27 07:23 PM

You always bring such vivid thought and emotion with your perspective...
The aftermath...those stacked up, caked on...dried out feelings...
The end of wintering is near, dear one...
Watch what happens when April cries, and clears the dishes for May.
TD

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