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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2004-02-26 04:18 PM


Drifting off into sleep, I think of you
Its funny because I don't even like you, well I didn't before this dream

The dream starts out in a candle-lit bathroom, there are so many people in there I cannot keep track
Suddenly, my body becomes emersed in warm water, I grab your hands as you whisper in my ear "Its ok honey, I'm here"
There's not much pain, just alot of pressure as I begin the pushing that will give another life
I'm screaming at the people, "Please leave, I can't concentrate."  
The next thing that happened was so sudden, I felt her head emerge between my legs
You reach down and gently pull her up to the surface

I awoke in the position that I was in, in the dream, my mother stands over me asking if i'm ok.  I don't know what to say to her.
Why is this dream so strong?  Although what I feel now for you, isn't wrong
I didn't have any attraction to you at all when we first met
Now you are the only thing on my mind, you and our daughter, Grace.


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Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-26 04:45 PM


Interesting. Grover.
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2 posted 2004-02-27 12:26 PM


kinda mind twisting ... and graphic
Richy
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3 posted 2004-02-27 04:56 AM





Our dreams can be pretty hard to
interpret at times

There's much to think about in this


Nice Writing Laura!


Richy

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