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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-02-26 10:29 AM



The other side of
this -

Stillness falls as a ghost on
restless footsteps.

We live in a world of echoes.

Longing for this other
side.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2004-02-26 10:31 AM


Very good writing ...thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-02-26 10:41 AM


We live in a world of echoes.

How very true this line is.  Well done sir.

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-02-26 10:48 AM


liked the shadowy feel to this
Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-02-26 11:12 AM


Wonderful Eric!
Much enjoyed as always.
Hugs~


~ Can I keep you? ~
            -Casper  
            

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2004-02-26 11:15 AM


Love your minimalism, Eric -- every word counts and perfectly balances intent, impression, and expression through tender wisdom and observation.  Kudos.

-MVS

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Margherita
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6 posted 2004-02-28 09:36 AM


And the longing
too echoes
through Universe
and my heart's song
is captured by yours.
From that moment on
there is only one sound,
it is known as
perfect harmony.

In the stillness
we discover the other side.

Beautifully inspiring, dear Eric.
I love you, Margherita

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7 posted 2004-02-28 01:52 PM


you never cease to make me slump back in my chair and sigh "awesome" under my breath
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8 posted 2004-02-29 05:56 PM


And, this world of echoes, my dearest Merlin, is a wondrous place when we get to read your wondrous verse over...and, over...and, over........

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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9 posted 2004-02-29 07:40 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Eric, this is ever so true, dearest friend, we all need to listen beyond the echoes and hear what is REALLY there, as some things are more audible and make more sense than echoes! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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