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sea_of_okc
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0 posted 2004-02-26 08:23 AM



Tell me that you love me
Though I won't believe a word
Tell me that you need me
So I can say that is absurd

Tell me all your feelings
I'll decide which ones are true
You try to get so close to me
But that just will not do

Tell me that you want me
I will say you are in lust
Say you want to marry me
So your bubble I may bust

Steven Seaman
In every heart there is darkness else how could we know light?

© Copyright 2004 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
sea_of_okc
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1 posted 2004-02-26 08:24 AM


Woohooooooo post # 500 and it took me less than 5 years!!!  

Ah well, hoping to find time to be as active as I was way back when.... now if only life would cooperate...

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-02-26 08:24 AM


A real smile maker for my morning.  I enjoyed the delightful way this rolls off the tongue.
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-02-26 08:26 AM


oh!  Congrats on 500!!
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-02-26 01:01 PM


congrats on 500!

love the poem...level-headed, down-to-earth

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2004-02-26 01:40 PM


sir... being told so we can deny or explain away..is one way to run but we rarely hide from all the stuff inside..

nicely written


seaslady
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6 posted 2004-02-26 05:38 PM


Well Steve... maybe you are trying to tell me something???
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