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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-26 07:50 AM



More or Less?

lately
things have
put me
to the test
I want
much more
for I’ve
had less


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
sea_of_okc
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1 posted 2004-02-26 07:57 AM


Ahh sweet lady I know exactly what you mean. Been there myself and for me I have come to realize I will always have less... as long as I continue to settle for it. But no more, I will hold out for the best from now on...

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2004-02-27 12:30 PM


another one of your short and sweet poems  
a hard art to master , i like the way you describe your feelings , slick : )

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2004-02-27 05:31 AM


My toe is tapping in time with yours, ladyslick.


inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-02-27 08:52 PM


simple and i like the beat
Rick
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Victoria, Australia
5 posted 2004-02-27 10:55 PM


1slick_lady, thank you for sharing this today, enjoyed, short with thought.


We all want more, for we've had less
We want the life that God did bless
But some things are just meant to be
As wanting more's our legacy

Sincerely
Rick

iliana
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6 posted 2004-03-01 02:14 AM


And, Helen, you deserve more!  I like your word play. Hope you're doing okay.   ....jo
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