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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-26 01:06 AM



Past Quicksand


every tear
you cry
I will tenderly
touch each
just as close
as your breath
I am within
your reach

I will be
the best friend
you have
ever had
the letters that
form words
in the
blankest pad

in your eyes
I turn liquid
and on you
I shall pour
when you think
I’ve given all
I’ll find
for you more

today
and forever
right by
your side
others give you
broken promises
our bonds
are tied

you know
I know
all about
quicksand
but the only
way you drown
is without
another’s hand



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
WildPoet
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1 posted 2004-02-26 04:14 AM


Nice feel to this write.

WildPoet

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-02-26 05:10 AM


beautiful
suthern
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3 posted 2004-02-26 12:00 PM


Yes. *S* This is so lovely... and loving! *S*
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just out of reach
4 posted 2004-02-26 01:57 PM


in your eyes
I turn liquid
and on you
I shall pour
when you think
I’ve given all
I’ll find
for you more


Lovely Helen. hugs, Chris

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