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~Willow~
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0 posted 2004-03-01 09:29 PM



he spoke again
from somewhere behind me
I closed my eyes
drank in his words

I could almost taste
the heat of his breath
a mist rolling silk from
the sweet of his tongue

I remembered how butterflies
tickled my middle
whenever his fingers
brushed soft against mine

the call of his smile
caressing his gaze
awakening feelings
that leave me undone

later that evening
our eyes met and locked
an intimate scene
across crowded room

aware that our longing
would soon be fullfilled
beneath inked in skies
& whispering moon...


~Willow~

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2004-03-01 09:45 PM


This is so very nicely expressed~
Lovely writing ~Willow~
and a warm welcome to you~

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2 posted 2004-03-01 11:41 PM


A very romantic poem.  Your name sings a very happy song too by the way.  Welcome to Passions Willow.
Kahlil
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3 posted 2004-03-02 12:43 PM


This is lovely, and exciting!  whew!  Welcome to Passions.  ~K~
iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-02 01:39 AM


Lovely, lovely writing, Willow!
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
5 posted 2004-03-02 01:49 AM


This was awesome! This is the first I've read of you, and I loved it. Welcome to pip...Please stay!

wordwizard
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on the way to next world
6 posted 2004-03-02 01:56 AM


welcome to Passions where you can continue on your romantic trail


passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-03-02 02:22 AM


well, two and a half years is a long time
~Willow~
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8 posted 2004-03-02 07:18 PM


thanks everyone.


~willow~

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