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Open Poetry #31

Sorrow I cause you

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-02-25 06:16 PM

Sorrow I caused you ...

You face is now so sad
and your smile is brief.
You speak in a sad voice
and you say so little.
I loved those things I lost
and it is all my fault.

Juju

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-25 06:19 PM

A great poem, Juju! Grover.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2004-02-26 11:26 AM

I've always been on the receiving end... from ones with no apologies. *S* I like this very much. *S*

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-02-26 11:32 AM

short and direct. well done.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2004-02-26 10:37 PM

I usual was in the recieving end, until I relized that by leaving him alone, I was hurting him, and I think now he wont hurt me.Its really hard because he is such a nice guy! Smiles.
Juju

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-02-27 03:12 AM

Nice writing...James

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2004-02-27 04:51 AM

I know both sides of this one Juju

Thanks for this

It's nice to see your feelings
appear before you, out of the blue

Richy

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-02-27 08:27 AM

to believe that what we think of ourselves, will trickle into all our relationships...including our one with the world...should signify the great importance of trying to understand and make things right...and when we accomplish that within ourselves, then it filters around everyone else.

Your awareness is most good and evident, thanks for a very insightful read

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2004-02-27 10:09 PM

Thank you leej and Richy!

-Juju-

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