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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2004-02-25 12:27 PM


Tired of you, I am its true
You think you can just come back into my life whenever you feel like it but i'm honestly through with you
I don't want you can't you see?  You think I'm with someone....I let you believe that because I can't put up with this charade anymore.  I've closed this door
Only you can't seem to understand that and rip it off its hinges so i put up another one.....go ahead try to take it down
My life is going great, its absolutely wonderful
I haven't felt this free since 2000.
Why is it that you are out to destroy me?  What did I ever do to you?
I am completely wiped out though physically and emotionally
I am so fatigued I could probably sleep twenty-four hours straight
What you are doing will get you nowhere, why do you have to put me in the middle of your affairs?  I'm not coming back to you so stop trying to play your cutesy games.  
Anyhow,  my rant is now done.....its my time to step into the sun.

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-02-25 12:32 PM


Bravo Laura, I too went through this crap for awhile and it is so great when we finally learn to move forward into the sun.  
Grover
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2 posted 2004-02-25 12:52 PM


Right, get it out. Grover.
Richy
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3 posted 2004-02-25 03:59 PM





A person can only take so much

Sometimes it is, time to move on


The best of luck to you Laura

Enjoyed the poem!






nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-02-25 04:25 PM


I've had that door ripped off its hinges...

hugs
M

ParisGrl
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5 posted 2004-02-26 10:01 AM


I'm sorry I don't have the time to address each of you.....but I  thank you for reading this poem and your very kind words.

~Laura~

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