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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-02-24 11:39 PM


Baby That's You

You walk into the room.
My heart goes boom.
You walk towards me.
I like what I see.
I barely know you,
but I know I want too.
You're such a delight.
I know who I'll dream of tonight.
Sensual, baby that's you.
Exciting, you're all that too.
Where do you sleep at night.
In my arms would be allright.
Melt me with your charms.
Take some time to hold me tonite.
I have a feeling that you
look good in red lingerie.
If I ask you to wear it,
what would you say.
My eyes are wide open to you.
Tell me what you want to do.

JamesLee
February23
2004

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-02-25 04:45 AM


sweet!
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2 posted 2004-02-25 05:23 AM


oh red lingerie is always a great way for getting the heat to rise!
this is cute

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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3 posted 2004-02-25 06:00 AM


Interesting poem JM....

Thanks...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
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Orlando, Florida
4 posted 2004-02-25 07:22 PM


OK JM - you are ready!!  Do you have the wine and the roses too??  I can see your eyes sparkling from here.
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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5 posted 2004-02-25 08:27 PM


Uh - I'd say you're definitely hooked (line and sinker too).  Nice ... and nice way to be too.


jwesley

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6 posted 2004-02-26 12:13 PM


Red...just happens to be my favorite color!

~ARH
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Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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