virtual relief (inspired by NewEnglandlazurlu)

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Open Poetry #31

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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0 posted 2004-02-24 12:23 PM

virtual relief
in capsules of ease-filled words
lessens pain’s lessons

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-02-24 02:17 PM

Wonderful play on words, Steven...very, very good!

jellybeans
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2 posted 2004-02-24 02:28 PM

love this...our little 'blue' pill...virtual relief......

steavenr
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3 posted 2004-02-24 02:38 PM

sunshine, thanks, but the words played easily off this one

jellybeans, now that should have been the title "the little blue pill" --good one.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-02-24 02:42 PM

Excellent !!
Enjoyed this one!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

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A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2004-02-24 08:18 PM

I'm speechless! WOW!!!! Thank you very, very much and glad I was able to give you such brilliant inspiration.

Hugs and Grins, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.

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