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sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 2004-02-24 12:16 PM

A love from the past
O'ertakes me so fast
In it's wake a soul numbing fear

That once and again
I'll commit the same sin
And lose what I hold the most dear

Why I let her go, I still do not know
Perhaps there's a reason
Just wasn't the season
For our love to take root and to grow

Do I now have the chance
To rekindle romance
And assuage this pain in my heart

This time will I fight
Will I do what is right
Or will fears always keep us apart

Every day I kneel down and pray
Lord help me be strong
To amend an old wrong
Grant me courage to not run away...

Steven Seaman
In every heart there is darkness else how could we know light?

© Copyright 2004 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved

seaslady
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since 1999-06-25

Posts 43

1 posted 2004-02-24 12:38 PM

nice to see you writing again... this is interesting... I'll talk with you soon...

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2004-02-24 12:39 PM

I like this very much... great rhyme scheme! *S*

Welcome back... it's great to see you posting! *S*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-02-24 12:44 PM

sea_of_okc
Good write, enjoyed the read.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-02-24 01:17 PM

Oh boy...do I know this.

Good Luck!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-02-25 12:59 PM

Sea, I enjoyed reading this.
If it's written from personal
experience, I sure do hope that
things will work out the way you want.

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-25 01:09 PM

you show lots of strength...things will be just fine

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-02-25 04:55 PM

Those past loves sure can trip one up...
a very nice write, SOO...very nice...

Midnitesun

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Gaia

8 posted 2004-02-26 02:22 PM

smiling in understanding, and wishing you smooth sailing to the cozy harbor of your choice

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