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Montana Wind 2
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Montana Wind 2 |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Standing on this mountain high Arms spread wide unto the sky Gazing out across the lands Laughing, touching, holding hands The breeze hurtling past our faces Enjoying its own private races The montana wind on the fly Rushing past us, blowing by Together here, on mountain top Our lives, the time, slows to a stop We stand together straight and tall Neither of us afraid to fall Our hearts beat together, two as one Our lives with eachother, barely begun, In our hearts we trust eachother Both our lives for the other To you I'd give my soul to hold To shield you from a world gone cold To hold you safe in loves embrace To keep the chill from your face The world out there, scared and torn The fights go on, the people forlorn But on this mountain, wild and free That world is forgotten, its only you and me One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Nice.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rdz9 Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The significance of wind and mountain are like canvas and brush. Nice write TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A friend of mine has described Montanana to me many times and says I need to see it to believe it. This is very good. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wondrous write, enjoyable, upbeat and filled with promise.... shhheessshhhh, I really wish the world out there would spend more time encouraging and less time thinking of what can't or won't be...the gossip is dreadful and destroying...and America presently thrives on it...and they call it Entertainment....I fear for the future of our children. But with people who think and feel like you do, we gotta make a difference, even if only a tad...smiles and hugs...thank you for sharing. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The breeze hurtling past our faces Enjoying its own private races The montana wind on the fly Rushing past us, blowing by ~*~ You found a breeze in Montana?  The one time I was pushed through there, left me with tears in my eyes that I did not have time to take in the glorious sky. Well done, Sir. |
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tavern wench Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 44 |
I would love to see the mountains of Montana. This is a very romantic piece of writing. Very well done. |
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