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Soul Mate?
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Soul Mate? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Electric sometimes defines those dark nights Summer of the cold child… Rumor has it Moonlight carries “The” real meaning Could it be karma or simple luck? Or just a tad of both? Are we led by settling lightning bugs? The ones that never travel I strangely, always wished for a little more? I wonder if you’re there, soul mate. Rush hour is slitting hairs I’m still focusing on millions of stars While The economy grows thinner Thanks to convenience products All seems crazy as bedbugs Attacking everyone’s patriotism And in this ghost town, I’m still waiting to score Are my eyes looking in the state’s high court? Or…is it simply, I couldn’t care less anymore? I still see you fly by, catching a glimpse, still clueless The fact that you bought a plane is no secret First and foremost, winning was your amulet Along with the younger generation Rural areas are always calling me, reaching out they’re arms Like a lover…soft…sweet Why is there such a controversy over Passions? I’m still reading my special education handbook It’s pretty pathetic that you can’t voice words No child should be left behind, it’s so inappropriate But then…who am I to judge? I never thought my role as limited Though, some moron’s take things to a whole new level I’m a small town girl mining for brain power Still believing in the mystics Fighting over custody rights to my heart Bad melodies shouldn’t endanger the species I have little enthusiasm for crowds And I’m still waiting on a freight train That’s gonna take me beyond the clouds? I've just uncrossed my fingers is all. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Excellent, almost every line is a gem.  |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I like your descriptions. Thanks for sharing. I going to go read this again now - and ponder it some more.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lee, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us.  Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lee J...while i was away and watching from the sidelines...your poetry and your special way of seeing things is what i missed most to reply to....now that i am back i can say that i love to see through your eyes...and the very interesting way you write...most people will not get your work...but you enthrall me with your style..it is so free..so different..but in a very nice way....you see things like frames of film..then convey it to paper/screen...your snapshots of life are a joy to me and i am sure to other members of PIP...thank you for your words...so glad i can tell you that again..please keep writing more.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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