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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-02-23 10:47 PM





Curve of light hangs low
Venus quivers in its glow
Eyes raised in stardust



© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-02-23 10:57 PM


How lovely this is Karilea!!
A keeper for my library.
~Hugs & Smiles~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Death
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Twilight
2 posted 2004-02-23 11:47 PM


could not resist- One Acrostic coming thy way
        
Heavens glowing life powder
  Abiding gift Earthbound we long so for
    Ere any TearDrop's so fine melody fuel
      Veer off vaporize untouching losing
         Even a sacred touch dry anointing
            Never a chance so gather thy joy

In copious handfulls dancing in the dry rain
  Soaked in efferscent glow to life absorb

Handful after bushel bathe in starlights kiss
  Every touch magnifying the same beyond any
    Reading one could distantly untouchingly
      EverGlow stardust the light doth bring



Not the most pleasant job around. But the PIP-Gods make me serve my penance.

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-02-24 11:27 AM


absolutely you were right...*w*  adore this one.
EternitysHorizon
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Twilight's Orchestra
4 posted 2004-02-25 12:07 PM


well since so few have responded
I offer you an addendum

Blinking intagible unknowable
swirlng cosmic light patterns
blinding moment vision opened eyes to See

Just a thought Sunshine
toss it emboss it more likely
embark thyself pon to sighting self true thee


Now the pip bosses must admit
they get their money's worth here poem on poem on poem and often once again
no complaints here I am unlocked (at least somewhat from Death- that is a pleasant relief)
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Where rainbow touches earth gentlest
glow twilight abounding promising
the Orchestra Will Play Tonight

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5 posted 2004-02-25 06:24 AM


Nice write....thank you for the words...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2004-03-02 09:28 AM


Karilea~

you do these with such heavenly grace, as always beautiful!

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

scorpio
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right...there
7 posted 2004-03-02 10:13 AM


I saw that scene the other night.  It was very beautiful just like this write, Karilea.

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2004-03-02 12:10 PM


very nice...
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