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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-02-23 10:20 PM


sometimes i cry
because i feel so empty
so alone
do you know what you do to me
i want to write about happy stuff
i want to write about life
love
everything
but your whats on my mind
24/7
i hate you
i hate you so much
sometimes i cry just to feel something
even if its just a tear rolling down my cheek..
night after night.

© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-02-23 10:24 PM


Kool. I like this. I know how it feels. To want to be happy and alive, to want to feel alive again, but not able to because you are engulfed and blinded by hate. Yes. I do know it too well.

~Vampire Kisses  

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
2 posted 2004-02-23 10:48 PM


but your whats on my mind
24/7


Chelsea, my first thought when I got to this
Part was that's exactly how I am about my
Honey-Love. I honestly don't know what i would
do if i didn't have him and his love in my life.
He's my happy part of life. I hope that you
will find your happy part of life soon.
Hugs to you,  
Ethel

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2004-02-23 10:58 PM


you've penned a very important part of the healing process.


J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Death
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since 2001-05-26
Posts 112
Twilight
4 posted 2004-02-23 11:00 PM


Deep, deep is the night
especially when hate blots
out the sun, which at the moment
you may be appreciatve of

but when you strip down hate peel it away
anger, betrayel, amongst a few thousand other
emotions rise surface gleaming, maybe, just
maybe you will find no one is worth robbing

you 24/7 got to be more than that or you'd
hardly express it so, the old fogey advice
time heals all is and isn't true depends on
you and how much time you want to invest

and not a bad excuse for turning melancholy
mad at everything. I certainly fell that way
8 years of marriage, 6 years of , wanting
to die everyday, not trying to preach or toss

that old guy stuff your way- just wanted you
to know, you are not the only one, been thru
24/7 Hell emotions and someway someday walked
away, scars for sure, proves you were there

Good luck

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2004-02-24 09:51 PM


hugssss I know too, this feeling...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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