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Thus Simply Starved
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Thus Simply Starved |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What was it I was seeking? A former me…perhaps too vividly Snow melts and so erases where once has been Or good shall be much better in the purchase of pretend Should there be less expectation? Less deep sensation in a moment’s know, of could like snow Or candy on the tongue if but a taste to tempt the waters flow Some kind of transformation that may leave in death a former so What was it I was hoping? A sturdy self, so cast like stone and banned from gentle handling Leaving heaps of what love cannot face upon me to be waste Or yet I see that what was meant to be was simply of my taste A trinket in the market place…a sense of time inside the trace That shutters close so simply viewed…and never touched in gratitude Or grace…that teardrops stream the face of gone and truth buys certain fortitude Yet love is food Copyright Kkh 2/23/04 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Never give away the gift you have been given, that you might always be able to share and show to others a part of you that releases what graces these pages... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! Grover. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, you always provide a sumptuous feast for the hungry reader! You are creative and innovative in your writing!  Love & Light, EA |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I can't believe the wisdom that was captured here and written down so eloquently. This demands several more readings-may I drop this one into the library? Wonderfully written! This one hit home. Sadie |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Couldn't have ended it better ... really enjoyed it all, but the end put the exclamation point to it. well done, jwesley |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Just went to the library and checked out this one. Thought I'd send it back up again. I enjoyed reading it again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sadie thanks! I am glad I didn't miss it! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD Rising from the whelp Emotion rises Vision Knocking What was it I was seeking? A former me…perhaps too vividly Snow melts and so erases where once has been Or good shall be much better in the purchase of pretend Should there be less expectation? Less deep sensation in a moment’s know, of could like snow Or candy on the tongue if but a taste to tempt the waters flow Some kind of transformation that may leave in death a former so What was it I was hoping? A sturdy self, so cast like stone and banned from gentle handling Leaving heaps of what love cannot face upon me to be waste Or yet I see that what was meant to be was simply of my taste A trinket in the market place…a sense of time inside the trace That shutters close so simply viewed…and never touched in gratitude Or grace…that teardrops stream the face of gone and truth buys certain fortitude Yet love is food Copyright Kkh 2/23/04 |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh wow... i'll just end up repeating everyone else..so just know...this is fantastic  |
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