Open Poetry #31 |
Star Showers Twilight |
Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Twilight rain rapture spinning star showers cleanse fogged hearts sky song ritual summons forgiving while ALL dreams summoned call bathe thee starlight Remeberances white glowing midst calling night all within FireHeartPassionsBreath seizing mind ancient yesterdays dreams cleanse white worth remembering gifts of Too-Long Nights helpless kneeling stars brighter than July days soft voice sings "only let your spirit fly tonight cleans all and all disposing unrightheous moments pouring stains from inner most sight" falls about swirling light sparkling diamonds voices fall growing choir stands melody drifts symphony instruments spinning round the circle every star begins to join LightSky Filled Filling.. Heaven thou hast washed me clean as never before stumbling orientation clothes now snow-drift white turning rejoin myself startled yet not, twould seem my sins required all night, for I greet the Sunrise New cleansed reborn glowing internal embers alight as worlds stand unshaken yet my eyes pierce beyond Another twilight given light of One who knows only the giving illuminata purging world's stain I stand thousand words of thanks writing patheticly inadequate words for all that fills guides me keeps hand on heart as I slip am brought back up ever lasting mountain one fills lungs starved engulf gasping life rarified air gift beyond measure fill to ever overflowing thy servant ForeversEternity Humility thankfullness beyond those singing stars I am thine in a life for a life thy will not mine Not the most pleasant job around. But the PIP-Gods make me serve my penance. [This message has been edited by Death (02-23-2004 10:12 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
helpless kneeling stars brighter than July days soft voice sings "only let your spirit fly tonight cleans all and all disposing unrighteous moments pouring stains from inner most thyself" ~*~ Ah, that inner voice... what, yours does not yell at you? Mine does! Enjoyed this, Sir... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I felt a wonderful spin while reading this..dizzydraindownstarsupmewind!! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice stream! Grover. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Beautiful sound to this...nice alliteration and imagery. In other words, I enjoyed reading this aloud! Thank you for sharing. Sadelite |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Thanks ALL, just trying to capture in words one of those unforgettable times as we all do trying with all will to attain verbs adjectives the like moments which burned on heart and mind never seem to slip away filed not but alive the mysterie Ieye thanks again Kj [This message has been edited by Death (02-23-2004 11:12 PM).] |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Actually Sunshine that "inner voice" tends to be most melody inclined with the counterpoint that drove me incessantly for the early years of songs I dreamed forever more than hoping and now a tiny bit proves true after twenty years of knowing tasting sounds inches from my hand it works but that as is said " Is another story" Best of all to thee Kj Not the most pleasant job around. But the PIP-Gods make me serve my penance. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
thousand words of thanks writing patheticly inadequate words for all that fills guides me keeps hand on heart as I slip am brought back up ever lasting mountain one fills lungs starved engulf ~*~ I think the stars dot your mountains tonight, Sir... Came back to see how this was going, saw more was added...in all ways... and as ever was, well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
stunning work, and the wording is rather effective. This wraps one in such a heavenly feeling, like a warm breeze of peace just blew by. Dixie is correct...*sigh* It's better than I could have planned.. |
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