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vandana
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0 posted 2004-02-23 09:48 AM


I don't know when,
But I have this feeling
That something's missing,
In my life
And that is you
You are missing in my life.

For so long I have searched for love
But it evades me every time
How I long for the day,
When I hold your hand in mine.

I know each day,
I pray for love
I guess it's too late,
To look for a new love
I still find my heart missing,
Something's still missing
In my heart.

One day love will touch your heart,
And it will eternally,
Love will give you wings to fly,
As your spirit is set free.


© Copyright 2004 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2004-02-23 03:26 PM


Very sweet, brought a smile

a lovely collaboration.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-02-23 03:44 PM


nicely done, you two..I just hope that it will happen some day.

*s
M

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-02-23 03:49 PM


AwGirlies~
Nothing amiss when the two of you dip in a dueted inkwell~
LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-02-23 04:36 PM


You two are having fun with these duets...
and that's a good thing!

Thank you!

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-02-23 07:18 PM


Nope! NOTHING'S "Missing With Suetang" ~ nor with Vandana! lol ~ You both write so sweetly together!

Love & Light to two lovely poetesses,
Linda

Suetang
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6 posted 2004-02-23 09:47 PM


Hello vandana

I just wanted to thank you so very much for asking me to do a duet with you.  I was very humbled that you should ask me.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

suthern
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7 posted 2004-02-24 11:27 AM


Beautiful work, ladies! *S* You write well together. *S*
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