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The Unknown |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Eyes reaching out in probing directions Finding how they came to be where they are Exploring valuable lively devotions To sense, holding together, shaky alliance Give me the nameless, as a biased advisor My stomach overflowing with conclusions false Pamper illiteracy with passions & knowledge Whatever arrives calm with world, comes 1st from the heart What occasions produce visual awareness in the mind’s eye? What blemish chooses direction, when no motive is alive? If the core owns no Divinity, what then, is the influence? Free will of life unshackles elated essence I hold close the valley’s thoughts of neighboring mountains It’s sensory of elaborate sources from nature’s fountains Reflective solid entities so preciously owned Inseparable when inhaled by perceived notions I breath, live, walk and talk Feel, perceive, sense and unlock Tracing distances bringing them in close Definite reforms integrity knows Regulating all human experience from birth What was the first sensation here on earth? I cannot accomplish the thresholds I do not see One million replicas circulate around me Waiting, inviting… Sensory movements and actions abide Within goals of possibility lie Interactions of unfamiliar Visualize touch within the outer world Relating a structural experience at hand Size and shape of the unknown to expand Connecting every element of the universe Into view becomes things diverse |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I cannot accomplish the thresholds I do not see I like this thought very much... *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'I hold close the valley’s thoughts of neighboring mountains It’s sensory of elaborate sources from nature’s fountains' How very rich your thoughts ... this is so lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Even with the greatest amount of wisdom and insight, we still find ourselves asking why at times.... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lee~ a powerful and enjoyable write... ~~**~~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lee J..this is wonderful....your word selections are amazing....nobody writes quite like you....there are many very good poets here at PIP....but for me you are the best....it is so good to be able to witness it..thank you.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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