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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-02-23 07:13 AM


Believe Me

I often rise in mellow tones
Above these sallow aging bones
Catch a moonbeam by a tale
And harpoon a symbols whale

And sometimes do a mental jig
Often eat an Eden’s fig
Seem a wile beyond my cope
Inject a dream just like dope

She waits for me in Samarkand
A lovely place in wonderland
A place of flowers just to woo
An Ivy tower just for two.

And I am I Sir Lancelot
The one and only of begot
That hangs his heart upon her door
And vows to her forever more

It’s a whale of a tale a coup
A whale of a sail for two

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2004-02-23 07:22 AM


Ahhhh, Sir Lancelot ... I enjoyed your tale this morning. A "Tower for Two" ... such a lovely thought.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2004-02-23 08:12 AM


Morning Sy!

Lucky lady...

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Kethry
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3 posted 2004-02-23 08:19 AM


Sy,
are you telling farradiddles - A whale of a tale indeed.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-02-23 08:20 AM


She waits for me in Samarkand
A lovely place in wonderland
A place of flowers just to woo
An Ivy tower just for two.

And I am I Sir Lancelot
The one and only of begot
That hangs his heart upon her door
And vows to her forever more

~*~

But you know what's nice?
You always invite everyone else
along for the ride!


Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-02-23 09:03 AM


Good morning, Sir Sonneteer!

You are a gallant, romantic and noble knight. It gives me so much pleasure to read your poetry. I still marvel at how you are able to keep up this superb level of writing! ~ day after day, year after year!

Big hugs and a huge smile,
EA

Kahlil
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6 posted 2004-02-23 09:09 AM


I do believe you.  You make it so realistic.  And so romantic!  ~K~
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-02-23 09:24 AM


Ah!  Good morning Sir Lancelot!
And a beauty of a write this is sir.
Stop by for tea...perhaps I can find some figs.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

vandana
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8 posted 2004-02-23 09:35 AM


enjoyed
LeeJ
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9 posted 2004-02-23 09:35 AM


beautifully written
suthern
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10 posted 2004-02-24 10:53 AM


I definitely believe. *S*

Beautiful write, dear friend! *S*

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-02-24 11:17 AM


Kit
Thank you sweet, always a pleasure to have you read me.

Susan,
Thank you dear.

Kethry,
Yes I am. LOL

Sunshine,
THank you love.

Earth Angel,
It's all because I have an Earth Angel.

Kahlil,
How nice, thank you.

Nancy,
Be right there.

vandana,
THank you.

LeeJ
Thank you sweet.

suthern
You are a love.

garysgirl
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12 posted 2004-02-24 02:10 PM


Seymour, and I love your tales and your sails.
Hugs, my friend  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
13 posted 2004-02-24 07:17 PM


Ethel,
And I love your reads and replies.

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