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Open Poetry #31

more twelve word poems.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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0 posted 2004-02-23 05:32 AM

twelve word poem No.2 - 11/02/04

One man lost the day,
In defence my lord
A bloody hero.

twelve word poem No. 5 - 12/02/04.

A better world.
All the poets are gone
Forced into mass resignation.

twelve word poem No. 6 - 16/02/04.

Who needs these haunted words?
Not I the poet
Writing with shadows.

twelve word poem No.7 - 16/02/04

Welcome escape of the stars.
Let them pass by
While we dance.

badger, Badger, BADGER, BADGER Mushroom, Mushroom

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-23 07:35 AM

"Who needs these haunted words?
Not I the poet
Writing with shadows."

So much encapsulated in so few words, Andrew. I enjoyed the way you captured your thoughts in each of these. Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2004-02-23 08:21 AM

I like the same one Kit does, it's not surprising though it's a very profound thought. Write on!

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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