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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-02-22 06:55 PM



pan-fried, soul-led, dyed
meatless state of mind
filet of soul denied
reckoning spatter-felt pots
of decaying spoon-fed
lies, pan-fired, pan-fried


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-02-22 06:58 PM


okay, I'm hungry
Richy
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2 posted 2004-02-22 07:19 PM



Pan-fried, raw hide
self pride now denied
cold eyed, lost bride
now decide, cut and dried
Hearts inside, now divide
Turn of tide, coincide
with my pride, now inside
will take world for a ride
Biggie size, my pan fries

Thanks Steaven
Yes I tried
Had to quit
Now I'm fried


LOL Thanks Steaven
That was fun!


Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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3 posted 2004-02-22 09:14 PM


Almost musical, very good! Grover.
Sadelite
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4 posted 2004-02-22 09:38 PM


lyrical!  This one rings, steavenr!  
          Sadelite

garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-02-23 04:52 AM


  Very good, steaven!!
Hugs  
Ethel

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-02-23 09:10 AM



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