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pain-ted in the night
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pain-ted in the night |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
i tried to let my heart breathe but your feigned smile swallowed the air i tried to let my eyes hear but your pursed lips bid me flee into reverie…shallow thoughts on deep sighs puckered lips to sob the soul instead of kisses bright and bold i tried to let my heart breathe but the source of my soul was your candle of de-light faltering, flickering, pain-ted in the night. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed this. Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr Clever read, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice word play |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Steaven, I thought the title was Pan-Fried... After I read it though, it might as well have been... It probably wouldn't have hurt as much either... Yeah... that's a rough one Sorry if you had to go through that No one, should ever really have to Great Write Steaven!  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
grover, seymour, passing...thank you very much Richy...you left me laughing...I had to write one for you...you will find it as pan-fried LOL read it with the emotion of a sixties beatnik read...serious nonsense |
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