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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-02-22 04:55 PM


TWENTY OR LESS...#197

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


time

unspooling your soul

like origami unfurled

awakening silent songs

only I can hear


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2004 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-02-22 04:58 PM


Loved the poem and your choice of wording, Mark!
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2 posted 2004-02-22 06:03 PM




(sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, God Bless You, you bring vast wisdom through brevity, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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3 posted 2004-02-22 06:18 PM


Terrific one here Mark!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-02-22 06:21 PM


MARK,
You just rang the bell.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-02-22 06:49 PM


wonderful
MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2004-02-22 07:19 PM


Jo, I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you for stopping by.

Noah, more like "opinion from restriction"...

Nancy, thank you, Dear.

Sy:  Dinner time -- sounds good!

Thank you, Dixie.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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7 posted 2004-02-23 09:20 AM


I like this very much! *S*
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8 posted 2004-02-23 09:44 AM


liked this one a lot
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9 posted 2004-02-23 09:50 AM


enjoyed
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