navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #31 » Marksman
Open Poetry #31
Post A Reply Post New Topic Marksman Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-22 03:56 PM



Marksman

you use
your words
like a weapon
small caliber
power filled bullets
shot closely
to leave
me bleeding
from a
gaping hole


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-02-22 04:03 PM


Sometimes words can hurt so deeply..
it takes so long if ever to get over the hurt.
Hugs.

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Richy
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

2 posted 2004-02-22 05:16 PM



“The pen, is mightier then the sword”

And although they are just words,
it is the meanings behind them, that can
cause the most destruction

A bullet wound can be much easier to
ovecome, then a broken heart

Some scars, never heal

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2004-02-22 06:07 PM




(big angel hugs) This is so very heartaching, dearest friend, words cut deeper than bullets do as shots are just sudden pain but words leave enduring echoes of discomfort! (sad sigh) God Bless You, dearest friend, I send healing hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
4 posted 2004-02-22 06:15 PM


Very good writing! Grover.
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

5 posted 2004-02-22 06:23 PM


ouch, punctuation by small ammunitions fire...good write
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-02-22 06:43 PM


words can do that sometimes

let me know if ya need me for back-up

Krawdad
Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

7 posted 2004-02-22 10:34 PM


Not to worry . . .
You qualify as an expert!
Bang, Bang!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #31 » Marksman

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary