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Tears From The Heart
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Tears From The Heart |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Tears From The Heart I feel I am drowning in death, A pool of sadness and fear. My mind, now seeks peace Because your body no longer feels, What are hearts and soul once felt. Allow me this final gasp, this last breath, To expel these final words from my heart; Between the weeps and sighs, there is strength, The courage and honesty I whisper to a confused self--- I refuse to lose your love.... I will always cherish your love...... I need your love...... I............. Your love.......... Needs me................ Marcel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Marcel, this aches, and it's expressed so well love the ending |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMarcel~ This cries ... you've shown the loss in poetic depth~ Poignant~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very poignant write, but well written. Enjoyed. |
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