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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-02-21 09:46 PM

Lights on the water

sing of my heart silvergull

the sea will hear us

fly above horizon's edge

return to me the dreams we lived

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2004-02-21 10:13 PM

Cleanly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2004-02-21 10:19 PM

crisply written and expressed! I am a lover of the beach, so this one was special!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-02-22 05:05 AM

maybe I need to go there

*sigh*

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2004-02-22 06:19 AM

Lights on the water

sing of my heart silvergull

the sea will hear us

fly above horizon's edge

return to me the dreams we lived

~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~

Living;
this wide-awake dream called life
distant gull's cry-
as waves crash into foam
memories too rise and fall.

Thank you Inked One ~P

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

5 posted 2004-02-22 09:17 AM

You can really feel the glittering of the ocean and smell the salt of the air. You place it together so very well. I enjoyed very much!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-02-22 09:25 AM

inkedgoddess
THe egg is a gem. Beautifully done.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2004-02-22 11:01 AM

enjoyed

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

8 posted 2004-02-22 12:39 PM

Beautiful words

Years ago I read Jonathon Livingstone Seagull.

You brought the images back.

Thanks

Dave

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

9 posted 2004-02-22 12:41 PM

Very good! Grover.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-02-22 05:09 PM

thanks for dropping in

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

11 posted 2004-02-22 06:00 PM

I like this mood in you ma'am.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

12 posted 2004-02-22 06:17 PM

nice imagery...you can really see this one...

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

13 posted 2004-02-22 10:17 PM

Good job!

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