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Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2004-02-21 09:00 PM

Dark Angel Dream

It is the last full day
Of my Australia tour.
Today they take me to visit
The Australian centre for deaf-blind children.
We drive, listening to the car radio.
The radio stations sound like ours …
News and traffic,
Weather and sports …
Gossip and games.
We arrive at the center for deaf-blind children.
And then Dark Angel comes.
It seems she has arranged the visit.
I wonder how I will communicate with them.
I suppose they don’t use ASL.
Then a boy comes up,
Talks to me in perfect Spanish.
I think: What? …
Spanish … in Australia?
I decide to impress another boy
By telling him I’m from the USA.
He says: Fooey.
He says: We read about you in our studies.
I’m resigned, I guess,
That not everybody likes us.
I wanted to ride a kangaroo,
Maybe feel some duckbill platipi,
More mysterious Auzie things,
But it is time to go …

Sleep,
And let some of that unconscious stuff
Come bubbling to the surface.
Let the archetypal inspiratrix speak.
You never know what she will show you next.
Revere and love and honor her,
For she is the endless wellspring
Of your creativity;
She is the everlasting fountain
Of your dreams.

Jaime
My boomerang won’t come back.
Charlie Drake

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2004-02-21 10:17 PM

It is not often I am taken unexpectedly in a direction I did not choose. Thank you for this.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-02-21 11:36 PM

Jamie

I know a dark angel too....enjoyed this..thank you!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2004-02-22 12:12 PM

Jamie, I loved this... wanted it to go on and on and I would never have stopped reading if it had never ended...as is . . . the read may have stopped but I'm carried by the . . . momentum...

Absolutely wonderful write.

jimmy

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2004-02-22 01:53 AM

I rather like this....yeah, I really do. Well done...

K

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-02-22 09:48 AM

Jaime~
You transport the reader to a realm we could not have reached without your word-map~

'Sleep,
And let some of that unconscious stuff
Come bubbling to the surface.
Let the archetypal inspiratrix speak.
You never know what she will show you next.
Revere and love and honor her,
For she is the endless wellspring
Of your creativity;
She is the everlasting fountain
Of your dreams.'

How lovely ... creatively originality ... such talent you possess ... thank you for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-02-22 09:59 AM

Jaime..this is extremely well written!
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

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