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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Missed, when will his fingers reach out and touch form so dear? Busy, he says, but is there more to it, an excuse pulled from air? Is it generosity from which he gives the floor? If so, i really don't want it more. i'd rather immerse myself in art of others; Missed. Good friend, i feel so poor Unknowing if i'm read is worse than not having written any thoughts at all. [This message has been edited by Sadelite (02-22-2004 11:38 PM).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
and then there are those times when you hope you can take the words back before they are opened... you've captured the limerance dance well here Sadelite.. Creative |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sadie, his loss, is our gain... You have lovely thoughts, read and enjoyed, by many... Just like this one  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Local Rebel, Thank you for sharing your reflection. I agree. I am the queen of delete. Thank you for your response. Have a good evening. Sadie Richy, You are such a blessing to us all. Your sunshine is very much appreciated. Sadie [This message has been edited by Sadelite (02-22-2004 08:13 PM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You are read. Your thoughts often are complete and do not require comment, but you are right that all poets write for an audience even if the audience is the self. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sadelite I see much beauty and wisdom in your poetry as well as your replies...I appreciate you!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sadie, this was a very powerful writing. You said so much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes I just don't know what to say, you amaze me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The deepest joy lies in the moment of creation ...of putting a thought, an image to paper. And in sharing there is a moment of suspense, but it's always worth writing and sharing. Many may read, a few only may express their approval. The one truth remains, you have done what you love to do. And isn't this quite a deed in itself? You write beautifully and stir reflections! Love, Margherita |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
I'll definetly follow your writes Sadelite, you are an amazing and gifted writer you can be sure that you will always be looked at and read with admiration. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sadelite - you write well and I agree that getting someone to read what we write is often pretty important. Loved this one! Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Sadly so many just can't respect or appreciate ones own thoughts and feelings, dearest friend, THAT is why I don't accept Constructive Critiques here, as my thoughts are my own like everyone's are to themselves and criticizing them seems unethical to me! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, YOU are your own (and only) critic, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I read this and liked it much, "Unknowing if i'm read is worse than not having written any thoughts at all!" Grover. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Thank you, All. Happy writing to you. ~Sadie~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Busy, he says, but is there more to it, an excuse pulled from air?...... I go through the same thoughts constantly each time I read his apologies , in fact I had one this morning saying he had been busy Hope |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Is it generosity from which he gives the floor? If so, i really don't want it more. i'd rather immerse myself in art of others; Missed. Good friend, i feel so poor Oh, yes... I know this. *S* How well you've written the ache of deprivation. *S* You are read... and appreciated... I can promise you that. *S* |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Sadie, Beautiful sharing....sometimes, when the Muse takes over, writing becomes so effortless, sharing...well, then, thats another story....please, dear, keep writing, keep sharing...~P |
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