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Deadly Dance
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Deadly Dance |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
How many have been put into a trance still attached in a deadly dance that continues between connected bodies it persists woven in coupled hotties are there no deadly nightshades up afield are there no deadly elements to yield, the sabre rattles in its sandy den warns of an unwary passerby then... slithers between an anvil and hammer did you witness a ghost only to stammer? many have submitted to an evocative trance aware life's charade was only happen stance... and the dance continues to scornful cords heart rhythm scatters in leaps from fjords 'tis a happen stance dance that marks existence a sorrowful morrow to trot in deadly persistence. [This message has been edited by wordwizard (02-21-2004 10:03 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Brilliant analogy and excellent verse! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
How many have been put into a trance still attached in a deadly dance that continues between connected bodies it persists woven in couple hotties Wonderfully expressed! Sadelite |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice. Grover. |
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