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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-02-21 07:20 PM

Before you go
And leave,
I guess,
We better say the words
for the sake of love.
If we won't let our love
to be alive,
For the one last time,
We used to say these three
words
Then you can realise,
How much our love meant to be?
Together,
If you still believe,
Our love is over,
But if you leave,
Please take this love with you.
And remember take of yourself
and if you need me,
I will be there for you
But for last time,
Please say you care
and love
As much I say to you.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-02-21 07:26 PM

So tender, your sweet words!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-02-21 07:26 PM

We so need to hear those words don't we vandana? Lovely. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-02-22 05:14 PM

(sigh) God Bless You, dearest friend, let's hope this is never the last time though as you deserve happiness eternally, yay, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-02-22 06:55 PM

ouch

hugs you

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2004-02-22 07:13 PM

This was lovely vandana.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-02-23 01:08 AM

Lovely...James

Rosalind Palafox

Registered

Member
Posts 88

7 posted 2004-04-12 04:31 AM

i know that particular feeling... i understand completely where ure writing from. hope all goes well.

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2004-04-12 08:51 AM

Beautifully expressed Vandana.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-04-12 08:56 AM

Vandana,
Your poem shows such love and sensitivity.
I enjoyed it very much.
Sadie

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-04-12 08:58 AM

Oh how we all need to hear those words Vandana.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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