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Have You Ever? |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Have You Ever? Have you ever looked outside, and wondered where I am? Have you ever felt the waves, rush up into the sand? Have you ever kissed me, in the middle of a dream? Did you wish that it was just, as real as it seemed? I’m not looking for a person, who I can, live with I am looking for someone, who I can’t live without Someone who is not afraid, of who she really is Somebody who really knows, what love is all about Do you want to hold me close, and breathe into my ear? Do you want to feel my love, and always have it near? Do you want to feel my passion, beat within your heart? Do you want to show me how, you’ve loved me from the start? Have we ever made a window, tear with all our steam? Have I ever loved you, as we laid beside a stream? Have I ever made you glisten, as you wept with joy? Do you know how much you tease me, when you’re acting coy? I just want to press my lips, along your silky skin I just want to be inside of everything within I just want to feel your body melt all over mine I just want to feel you quiver as you start to climb I just want to bring us to a place we’ve never reached I just want to kiss you, when we both have lost our speech I just want to feel you when we both have closed our eyes When the passion we both want, is finally realized Hold your body close to mine and never let me go I will always love you in a way that makes you glow All the love that we both share will never let us part I will always be there honey, deep inside your heart |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I’m not looking for a person, who I can, live with I am looking for someone, who I can’t live without Yes. *S* This is wonderful, Richy... I hope you find all that and more. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohhh myyyy Richy!! This is one huge *Sigh* waiting to happen! How beautiful this is...wonderful write! You wear your heart on your sleeve well m'friend. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Richy, you are quite a poet! This was really so sweet and hope it reaches the right one! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
whew.. that was hot. What every woman wants to hear. You did good!  "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I’m not looking for a person, who I can, live with I am looking for someone, who I can’t live without Richy, I think this is what love is all about. You know that this hopeless romantic loves this!! I love the whole poem!!  I hope that you do find this right person, Richy... if you haven't already?? Hugs  Ethel |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You're a romanticist with built-in rhyming schemes! Grover. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Have we ever made a window, tear with all our steam? I liked the imagery in this especially--it took me back to junior high times when we rode the bus in the morning. Everybody would blow on the window to fog it up. Then we'd write stuff on the window like "I love ____" The glass would occasionally "tear" as you so well put it. I love reading your poems. They're so sweet and refreshing. Sadie |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WOW !! "At one glance |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow Richy, you ride the wave of desire here ... and quite beautifully so. May all this energy of love gather in that one special heart and be cherished and shared! Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're good! |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Great write indeed sir!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Richy You remind me of myself many years ago. LOL Enjoyed |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sigh!!! Richy you steamed up my screen !! Hope |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yes I have!   ~ARH (Princess)love and hugs Have you ever been in love....(My Favorite song by Celine Dion)....your poem reminds me of it! When I listen to it, it makes me cry...  My heart was touched with your words today Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Suthern ~ Thank you so much Suthern. I’m always happy to see you here. Nancy ~ Fohgit about the waiting... just let it happen...lol Thanks so much Nancy, you’re the best! Sadie ~ Thanks so much Sadie! I appreciate you always having such nice things to say! Susan ~ Wow Susan! Coming from you, that means a lot! I’m glad you liked it Thanks so much. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Ethel ~ Yes Ethel... hopeless in this case is not bad right? Ethel you’re the sweetest! Grover ~ Grover my friend, what a nice thing to say. Yeah I wish I could write real poetry, instead of what some might think of as cheezy rhymes... but hey, that’s all I got... and I enjoy it, so what the heck... lol Thanks again Grover! Sadie ~ Thanks Sadie. Yeah it’s nice to carve a heart in a tree with both your initials in it... but it’s also nice to write it on a window, that you just steamed up... Thanks for sharing that Sadie, I always appreciate you warm comments. Chris ~ LOL Thanks Chris! Your one word, said all the right things... thanks! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Margherita ~ Margherita you are so sweet, thanks so much for always saying such nice things! Dixie ~ LOL Thanks Dixie! I think your good too! Ravenwolfvoyager ~ Wow what a name! Thank you sir, for dropping by. I really apppreciate you taking the time, and for leaving the nice comments! Seymour ~ What a nice thing to say! Thanks Dad... lol Seriously Sy, that is wonderful compliment. Who knows, maybe someday I’ll be able to write as well as you! Wish me luck! Hope ~ Hope, that was really cute... lol I hope your monitor didn’t get damaged... lol Thanks Hope! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Princess, I’m glad you stopped in, and I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for the wonderful comments. They really made me smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, I always wonder of these things so much as I do for all of love as I have yet to experience its beauty and gift! (big angel hugs) I love it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
I hope all your romance isn't just for us...someone is mighty lucky! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richy~ 'I’m not looking for a person, who I can, live with I am looking for someone, who I can’t live without' Says it all !! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Ohhh Deb.. lol that was a classic (laughing in a good way!) If it was... just for all of you... would you think any less of me? Could you, think any less of me... lol Bless You Deb! That one hit me straight in the heart |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Noah ~ Noah, I don’t know why there isn’t a whole flock of girls vying for your attention? I guess, they just don’t know what they’re missing? They will soon though. I promise you! Marge ~ What would we do without you Marge? It just wouldn’t be the same! Not by a long shot. I hope everything is going well for you Marge. Thanks, always, for the kind remarks. |
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