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Who Can See the rainbow When it Rains at Night
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Who Can See the rainbow When it Rains at Night |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
Who Can See the Rainbow When it Rains at Night? When I whimper inthe dark for my forgotten dreams I would feel an unseen hand pat my cheeks dry then, I couldn't help but smile Who can see the rainbow when it rains at night? Does its colors still dazzle in the darkness? When I break into song in the smothering midnight silence a shadow lingers to listen and then ghostly fingers would break into a deafening applause Who can see the rainbow when it rains at night? Does its colors still dazzle in the darkness? I know you have been here all along You have come to visit me from heaven. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sadly haunting, gave me a chill |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
J. Samm, After reading this, I believe it is you who can see a rainbow at night and who receives a ghostly applause! This has such wonderful contrasts in it and it a very different--as positive way of looking at death as one could. Excellent thoughts and perspective. Sadie |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
thanks so much for the kind compliments. this poem is for my dad. he passed away last year and i miss him so. im glad to have shared my thoughts with you!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jasmine~ Did you know that I could feel the spirit move through this ? Beautifully compassionate tribute to the spirit of your father~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) God Bless You, dearest friend, my heart goes out to you for your loss but I believe with all my heart that your father is always guiding you in heart and spirit and he truly is painting rainbows for you at night and in your dreams he is taking you on Pegasus rides across the stars! (wipes tears) Bless you, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jasmine, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Who can see the rainbow when it rains at night? Does its colors still dazzle in the darkness? A very touching write sir. It is deep, saddening and inspirational. Very strong images come to mind. Excellent!! |
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