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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-02-20 06:21 PM


Morning echo'd smiles
Last evening echo'd
Thoughts

Talk holding that stranger
Cuddling him
Loving the world

Taxi
For the lives
We live these days

Clubs and heads
For a night out
The Foreign Legion wouldn't

And the snoring brings the rising sun
Hopefully
Not from the other side
Of the Rising son

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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-02-20 06:24 PM


This was written for some women who just took over a restaurent last night and then went to take over the town

I ended up getting cuddled as well.

No arguments on that.

Dave

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2 posted 2004-02-25 06:13 PM


Poems that were written from real life , things that happened to you the poet , they have a true feel .... good food for thought ,
JW

Grover
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3 posted 2004-02-25 06:18 PM


Nice images. Grover.
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