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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-02-20 05:59 PM


Love has come and placed its open hand upon the door
Peering just the first few kisses trailing to a deep adore
Humbled in the crescent of your heart, unending treasure trove
Shining spectacle of two, as we just stroll a pastured rove

The garden here is greener, all along the blossomed path
And sometimes peaceful silence washes over vigor’s bath
To play away beside you thinking always the enchant
As my mind sends throbbing wishes to the echoes of recant

Love has come in its grand spirit drawing near the sound we hear
Happiness in tunes vermilion stray these lips attending near
Just to know you are here with me brings a settling sensate
Where we seem to be together in this slow waltz to relate

Copyright Kkh 2/20/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Ravenwolfvoyager
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1 posted 2004-02-20 07:16 PM


Very beautiful and spellbinding Kathy, you hold a golden key that opens the hearts song.


Margherita
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2 posted 2004-02-21 05:12 AM


A beautiful connection shared with magical words.
Love, Margherita

Richy
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3 posted 2004-02-21 05:21 AM



One of my many favorites of
yours Kathleen


Absolutely wonderful write!





Kicking Kim
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4 posted 2004-02-21 05:26 AM


"in this slow waltz to relate"  love does feel like a slow waltz, brilliant imagery.

This is a lovely piece,  I have been absent from Passions for some time now but I am thoroughly enjoying my welcome back.  This was a wonderful read.  Hope to see more from you soon.

  ^*Kim*^  

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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5 posted 2004-02-21 11:27 AM


Kathleen~
In it's entirety ... lovely

But this -

'Just to know you are here with me brings a settling sensate'

- is just a thought-line to die for~

Stupendous isn't glowing enough ...
how's about soft stunning beauty ?
Yeah ... that'll do it !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-02-21 01:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is just adorable, sweet friend, I love the imagery you always paint in your poetry, God Bless You, this is wintergreen fresh, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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7 posted 2004-02-21 01:36 PM


simply gorgeous!
Magnus
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8 posted 2004-02-21 03:09 PM


Well done, K.  You always give us so many
images within your paintings...

garysgirl
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9 posted 2004-02-21 03:11 PM


Love has come in its grand spirit drawing near the sound we hear
Happiness in tunes vermilion stray these lips attending near
Just to know you are here with me brings a settling sensate
Where we seem to be together in this slow waltz to relate


Oh yes, Katheen...I do know this!!
Hugs  
Ethel


Ericc
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10 posted 2004-02-21 03:36 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2004-02-21 04:40 PM


sometimes we need to slow life down to a waltz as you've done here in the beautiful images that weave through your wonderful words
Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2004-02-21 06:01 PM


Beautiful.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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13 posted 2004-02-21 06:05 PM


Oh my Kathleen....this is so beautiful!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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14 posted 2004-02-21 06:12 PM


Lovely TD

Very inter-woven

No large blankets on your bed

Dave

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